Workshop.

The workshop we did in class on Tuesday was very effective. The first exercise was helpful because reading my piece outloud and actually hearing it helped me figure out where my organization worked and where it didn't. Also, it was easier to spot wording mistakes I made in my paper. The second exercise was also very helpful. The questions asked of where things were in my paragraphmade me realize that I didn't have alot of th information I needed in my paragraph. I have alot of revising to do on my Proposal Essay and the workshop helped me alot on what I should do to make my paper better.