Peer Review

I really enjoyed the chance to read Terrance's paper in class today. He is a realy good writer and his paper really caught my attention. It also gave me a look inti the life of someone else and made me realize al the struggles others go through too. I think that the Peer Review was a useful and entertaining way to get others opinions and give yours on the paper. It really helped me with my question about my intorduction, I decided now to take pieces out of my first paragraph to make an introduction and also to work more with expanding my ideas.